Road Tripping

My characters are on a road trip and I am trying to use this block of 2,500 miles to squeeze in some back story. Since they aren’t stopping to see the sights, they don’t have much to do in the car but watch the scenery change and talk. Unfortunately, I think my novel is too heavy on the dialog so far. I’m personally sick of hearing them banter. So I might go back and fill in some of the miles with “silent musing,” which I hope won’t be too much telling and not enough showing.


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